If Someone Were To Ask Me
What A Perfect Day Would Be
I Would Not Hesitate To Answer
I Wouldn't Think Of Places To Travel To
Or Wish For A Bright Sunny Sky
I Would Simply Say
What Is Truly In My Heart
My Perfect Day Is Always
A Day In Your Arms
Monday, 29 November 2010
WritingInRain
Just A Guy Who Enjoys The Process Of Putting Words On Paper
This is amazingly beautiful. Perfect!
Posted by: Geri Montoya | Monday, 29 November 2010 at 21:30
Nice lines. But you should think over the third line - it has a bit different rhythm.
Posted by: college admission | Monday, 13 December 2010 at 12:53